About the video: Well, the on (computer) screen bit was fine, but got a bit dragged out about 2/3rds of the way through. Maybe there could be an in screen, webcam of the guy speaking (with a low and sketchy frame rate of course :) The segment at the copier could be condensed (chop everything said after 'This is Borderlands 2' right up to the paper squish, then cut to the next scene... Everything else is spot on; great production and script!
Pruning, it's not about what you cut, it's about what you don't cut -- Hank Hill, Beavis and Butthead
VicariousE
About the video: Well, the on (computer) screen bit was fine, but got a bit dragged out about 2/3rds of the way through. Maybe there could be an in screen, webcam of the guy speaking (with a low and sketchy frame rate of course :) The segment at the copier could be condensed (chop everything said after 'This is Borderlands 2' right up to the paper squish, then cut to the next scene... Everything else is spot on; great production and script!
Pruning, it's not about what you cut, it's about what you don't cut -- Hank Hill, Beavis and Butthead
veselekov
I really like that quote. "its what you don't cut"
I kinda wanted to put the paper squish in there to give the feeling of low quality/budget production.