I rate this cartoon the amount of happening the plot consisted of.
Cool as shit
Good job don't let NGer reviews/star ratings spoil the fun.
'on ya ben.
MASSIVE HYPOCRITE COMING THROUGH.
I think your art style would look better frame by frame.
I see where you were going or what your were trying to get at but like.. it dragged on a bit. You could have had a joke in there about the guy like making the character get hit multiple times because she is like "Ahh" "Ohhh" and stuff. But like I dunno... its like when I was watching this you set up for these jokes and then like never went through with them. Its all about timing and pacing I guess.
Art was good.
Wow. You learnt how to use iMovie, congrats. I can't believe this won over Slackman in NATA which is a contest about animation when there is no actual animation in this "movie" (in the loosest term I can put.) What the fuck Tom.
I don't get the joke so I won't comment on it. One thing I did notice though is how many times you inserted a bell sound effect? It seems to be a bit too loud. Not to be a cunt or anything but Daily First and any award on NG shouldn't be a big deal or something you feel bad about not getting. I mean If you really want a guaranteed daily first all you have to do is recycle a joke about Nintendo, Mine craft or Pokemon. No offence but this isn't your best.
It's not, you're 100% right. However, It's not meant to be.
There is no bell sound effect. That is the background music from SilverPoyozo.
You can sound like a cunt all day long, though you're not sounding like one now. :D
Apparently I can't make a Minecraft video and get everything because Mine Mine Minecraft is in the shitter. ^_^
Thanks for the words though, hope to see you around.
STOP BEING ORIGIANL YOU FAGGOT. WOT SSITE YOU THINK UR ON M8.!!
(just kidding. this was awesome)
I really like the artstyle and I wish more people would do it. little tip if ou wanna get rid of those weird 'pen squirts' when you draw. chuck the smoothing down to 35 and you should be drawing like a pro in no time.
Awesome work dawg. can't wait to see wwhat else you can do
p.s. 'luv lardsticks'
Thank you for the tip on smoothing, veselekov!! I'll be sure to work with it!! :D
MnF: Paulson X Shaun (xxx) search it. Its on here somewhere. I think Zone made it. fucking.... got blammed tho
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